MY HAIKU
Thoughts of doubt linger
My legs start to shake
I still keep climbing
Cool breeze fills my lungs
The warm sun burns the daylight
Sweat runs down my face
Victory is mine
This mountain; a piece of cake
We will meet again
SHELL BEACH HIKE
Montag Version
Thoughts of doubt linger
My legs start to shake
I can't keep climbing
Ash clouds fill my lungs
Kerosene runs down my face
Finally over
Victory is mine
Books; all burnt to ashes
I sit back and think
Montag Version
Thoughts of doubt linger
My legs start to shake
I can't keep climbing
Ash clouds fill my lungs
Kerosene runs down my face
Finally over
Victory is mine
Books; all burnt to ashes
I sit back and think
Hey there! Amazing blog! Very descriptive and well thought out. Just a heads up, virtual TA's are now online and checking on your blogs on a regular. Best of luck!
ReplyDeleteSorry another TA's account was on my computer. I actually wrote the above comment if you need any help just contact me :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much :)
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